Monday, July 02, 2007

Treasured...an American Historical short story

I love historical romance. It is one of the reasons why I am so pleased that TREASURED has done so well. The reviews are still coming in, but this one is fantastic!

Treasured is just that, a treasure!

Ms. Bayley-Burke has crafted a fully developed story in just a few pages, and it is delightful. At a church picnic, Marianne, a woman who’s lost a huge amount during the Civil War, speaks with a man that she’s only met twice before. Their conversation quickly takes a romantic turn, and before she knows it, Marianne has been proposed to. The problem is, can Marianne trust Robert? Are his intentions honorable?

This sweet little story is a snapshot that portrays the aftermath of war, one that shows that although much is lost during times of strife there is often something to be gained as well. In this case, the promise of love. Jenna Bayley-Burke’s characters are well developed and it is apparent that Marianne is struggling with Robert’s proposal. The reader can see and feel her turmoil, and be right there as she makes up her mind about him. I liked being privy to the character’s feelings. I felt as if I was right there at the church picnic with them.

Treasured is a fast, enjoyable read, well written and interesting! -- 4 Angels, Fallen Angel Reviews
There are writers that exist who can weave a full-bodied, see-it-all tales with few words. The shorts I've read from Ms. Jenna Bayley-Burke are miniature novels - that's how much information and images she crams into her short works without making the reader feel overloaded. The scene flows from the page every time, leaving me satisfied with what I have read. Excellent.Treasured tells the tale of a marriage proposal, and follows the thoughts, feelings, and life of Marianne Phillips. Set in years gone by, the olden day feel is very much apparent. The dialogue matches the time, and transported me backwards, making me believe I witnessed this precious little scene.Wonderful. -- 4 champagne flutes, Cocktail Reviews
Treasured is a gem of a read. This sweet romance speaks in great volumes just through the characters dialogue. Marianne and Robert have a certain flare that radiates in the pages. Their expressions are so visual, it makes their situation believable. Jenna Bayley-Burke always sketches characters then constructs a tight outline that springs forth into a beautiful story. I found this precious tale heartwarming. 4 Cups -- Coffee Time Reviews

No comments: